Cookies its kind of cake .The first cookies were created by accident . Cooks used a small amount of cake ingredients to make a small little cake before they make the large cake .There are many reasons that why cookies are so popular. One of them is that people love snacks . And cookies is very easy to make so thats why people love it . Also, cookies can found anywhere not one country or two we can found it in a hall world. Cookies are very tasty and delicious. It taste like Biscuit and chocolates . You can say that this is another resone of why its popular. In my opinion cookies is very good for children when they want a snack . Or you can eat it in anytime anywhere you want ..
Hi Maryam,
ReplyDeleteThat's a good example of how to arrange a paragraph into topic sentence, controlling idea, supporting sentences and concluding sentence. You need to check some of the spelling and if it is one paragraph, you don't need any spaces between lines.
Thanks,
Nathan